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broken smile, Dream, freedom, holding me down, poetical, poetry, prose, unlove, writing
Only in dreams are your words as soft as the biggest cloud on my sky…
and it is not your issue.
Only in dreams can I laugh and run like I used to,
feeling the wind on my skin as I run down the green hill…
Now, only in dreams.
Only in there am I free, disentangled
From whatever holds me down to you.
(love, I think they call it.)
I am loved like I want to,
You are as secure as you wish to.
Only in dreams is my smile unbroken.
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© 2013, author writing as H. Stos. All rights reserved
Wow, I was coincidentally listening to the guitar version of “Greensleeves” when I read your poem. It seemed to match perfectly! lol
Beautiful poem as always, but I’m a little mad at you. I was trying to write a poem myself here in a coffee shop, but yours was so good that I don’t feel capable to write something so great now
kidding
have a good evening
I guess I should go listen to the song and see how they match
I’ll send you a nice version, well if you have your email on your profile. I’ll go see
I already read it while listening to the song. You were right, a perfect complement
I only read the whole comment now. Haha I’m pretty sure you can come up with something. I wrote two things before coming up with this, and even though I did not feel it was Good I pushed myself to post it because of my absence in WordPress lately. Good luck, Think “feelings”(laughs)
Thank you. You too
amazing. thank you for sharing.
Thank you, and thank YOU for reading.